Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconsarah--elizabeth: More from Sarah--Elizabeth


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
September 1, 2013
File Size
1.1 KB
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
153
Favourites
13 (who?)
Comments
10
Downloads
1
×
There's a piece of me that's 'missin,
A hole I cannot fill.
There's an emptiness that's 'gorwin,
becoming greater even still.

There's a part of me that's 'dyin,
A place that's void of love.
There's a darkness that's 'growin,
Becoming what I'm made of.

And I forgot your name,
yesterday,
I forgot this place.

I have lost a piece,
Inside.
I have broken me.
I have broken me.

There's a light in me that's 'drownin,
A light I cannot find.
There's a blackness that's 'growin,
So dark I think I might've died,

There's a love in me that's 'fightin,
'Wagin a 'loosin war.
There's a loneliness that's 'growin,
'Given me what for.

And I forgot your name,
yesterday,
I forgot this place.

I have lost a piece,
Inside.
I have broken me.
I have broken me.
I have broken me.
I have broken me.
A new song I wrote.
Add a Comment:
 

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconmrcbax:
mrcbax Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sad but lovely, I can kinda relate to this sometimes, I like it, nice work.
Reply
:iconsarah--elizabeth:
Sarah--Elizabeth Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Thank you so much love <3
Reply
:iconmrcbax:
mrcbax Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure!
Reply
:iconcaseydn:
CaseyDN Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Are you gonna record it?
Reply
:iconsarah--elizabeth:
Sarah--Elizabeth Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
I hope to! <3
Reply
:icontostitosrodrigoez:
tostitosrodrigoez Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
If you do can you plz post a link on here, I'd love to hear it.
Reply
:iconcaseydn:
CaseyDN Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
Reply
:iconanonthedarkone:
AnonTheDarkOne Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah yes, that missing feeling, that at first doesn't feel that it can be filled. The longer it's there the more it hurts....that is until you find that thing that finally heals the "unfillable void". A bit sad, but a truthful song, so I like it :).
Reply
:iconsarah--elizabeth:
Sarah--Elizabeth Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
Thank you Yaphet <3
Reply
:iconanonthedarkone:
AnonTheDarkOne Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Always :hug:
Reply
Add a Comment: